Post by rowes on Dec 15, 2008 15:34:55 GMT -5
Okay well it's not really finished but here is a rough idea to the new plot (I'll have to write it up properly but just so you know whats going on)
There were four packs that lived side by side in harmony. The Norakks, larger wolves who had a taste for fighting and war. Mendji, lighter and more agile, the hunters. Sundirra, or the beautiful ones, beautiful wolves who were distinguished by their glorious coats, healing properties and 'seers'. Then last of all the Avalithe, winged wolfen. The Avalithe were the 'peace-makers' amongst the packs (because they are the only ones who can access each land easily).
Everything went fine, only the odd fight broke out between the packs over petty little things, such as a stolen kill or half pack lovers. Until an aged seer from the Sundirra had a vision. He saw a young sapling tree flourishing in the lands of the Elk. It grew strong and tall, it's branches sprouting dark green leaves. All was well. Then seemingly out of no where a dark cloud of fog enveloped the tree, eating it's leaves and bark, stripping it bare. News spread fast through the packs, they knew the disease was coming. The one that would kill or drive their prey from the lands. Surely they would die... But the following night, as the seer slept he drempt again. This time a female, full with pups birthed. Was this pup going to be their saviour? But wait, it wasn't one pup he saw but two.
Tell'meh what you think
There were four packs that lived side by side in harmony. The Norakks, larger wolves who had a taste for fighting and war. Mendji, lighter and more agile, the hunters. Sundirra, or the beautiful ones, beautiful wolves who were distinguished by their glorious coats, healing properties and 'seers'. Then last of all the Avalithe, winged wolfen. The Avalithe were the 'peace-makers' amongst the packs (because they are the only ones who can access each land easily).
Everything went fine, only the odd fight broke out between the packs over petty little things, such as a stolen kill or half pack lovers. Until an aged seer from the Sundirra had a vision. He saw a young sapling tree flourishing in the lands of the Elk. It grew strong and tall, it's branches sprouting dark green leaves. All was well. Then seemingly out of no where a dark cloud of fog enveloped the tree, eating it's leaves and bark, stripping it bare. News spread fast through the packs, they knew the disease was coming. The one that would kill or drive their prey from the lands. Surely they would die... But the following night, as the seer slept he drempt again. This time a female, full with pups birthed. Was this pup going to be their saviour? But wait, it wasn't one pup he saw but two.
Tell'meh what you think